5 Simple Ways to Open Your Blog Post
With a Bang

by Brian Clark

What’s the second most important part of your blog post after the title?

Master copywriter Eugene Schwartz often spent an entire week on the first 50 words of a sales piece — the headline and the opening paragraph.

Just imagine how disappointed you’d be after crafting a killer headline for your post, only to lose readers with an opening that failed to carry the momentum. A great headline mixed with a lame opening is like inviting someone into your house, only to slam the door in their face as they approach.

So, here are 5 ways to open your post that will capture the reader’s imagination and pull them deeper into your content.

1. Ask a Question

Opening your post with a question is a rhetorical device (hence, the “rhetorical question”) that creates curiosity and gets the reader thinking. Thinking equals active engagement with your writing, and that’s a very good thing.

2. Share an Anecdote or Quote

Anecdotes are quick stories that can make people laugh or immediately establish the main point of your post. A nice quote from a recognizable authority or famous person can also work wonders when holding attention in those crucial opening seconds.

3. Invoke the Mind’s Eye

Producing a mental image in a reader’s mind is one of the most powerful things you can ever do as a writer, so expressly engaging the imagination is a powerful opening technique. Activate the mind’s eye of the reader by using words like “imagine,” “picture this,” “do you remember when,” etc.

4. Use an Analogy, Metaphor or Simile

Analogies, metaphors and similes are some of the most powerful devices available when it comes to telling a story in a single sentence. This is a great way to capture a reader’s attention and also acts to provoke mental imagery that allows readers to tell a story to themselves.

5. Cite a Shocking Statistic

Starting off with an interesting factoid is also a great technique. People love being provided with interesting data, but only if it is unique, startling, or even shocking. The statistic should also be directly relevant to the point of your post as well.

Bonus Tip: The third most important part of your blog post is the closing. A great way to close is to tie back into your opening.

So, which of the 5 techniques did I NOT use in the opening to this post?

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1 Tim L. Walker September 19, 2006 at 11:43 am

Great post (consider it saved for later).

I think you missed #5… I had to go back and double check for the simile, though, as it was near the top. :P

2 anty September 19, 2006 at 11:49 am

Thanks for these tips! I always forget how powerful simple words can be ;)

3 Nick Wright September 19, 2006 at 11:58 am

Or you can just post a photo of a monkey.

People love monkey’s (see: every other tv commercial).

:-)

In all seriousness, great post Brian. #3 is my all-time favorite copywriting tip.

4 Mike Empuria September 19, 2006 at 12:04 pm

I think that you used all five.

1 = “What’s the second most important part of your blog post after the title?”

2 = the link to “crafting a killer headline”

3 = “Just imagine how disappointed you’d be…”

4 = “like inviting someone into your house, only to slam the door in their face”

5 = “often spent an entire week on the first 50 words of a sales piece”

5 Brian September 19, 2006 at 12:04 pm

>>double check for the simile…

That one’s a bit tricky, but it’s actually an analogy.

Here’s a simile from a song that just popped up in my iPod shuffle:

I hold the microphone like a grudge.

Eric B. & Rakim
I Ain’t No Joke

6 Yu September 19, 2006 at 12:14 pm

Stats?
Point made, point taken. Might I add, scanability? Just by reading the headings and subheadings I get the point… which is great for browsers (as in people). And then if you’re an interested reader you can go back to the points and read in detail.

7 Jim Cronin September 19, 2006 at 12:16 pm

It has been a pleasure reading your tips/secrets/suggestions/hints/guides/lists for the last 3 months. I have learned so much. Although I may have elements in my posts that already meet your guidelines, none are quite as thorough, so it is always valuable to keep your emails handy.
Today’s was an excellent example, so I had to thank you.

8 Jessica Duquette September 19, 2006 at 12:32 pm

How’s this for a shocking statistic!?

[BTW whatever happened to the ill-fated interrobang that was supposed to change our grammatic lives? I remember being enchanted with the idea in 6th grade, but I haven't heard anything of it since...]

In 2001, Ikea conducted a random survey of 620 customers across the US to uncover their organizational and lifestyle habits.

What they discovered was a somewhat dismaying (in my opinion) and most assuredly shocking statistic:

31% of the respondants got MORE SATISFACTION from cleaning a closet than from having sex.

Hmmm.

9 Michael A. Stelzner September 19, 2006 at 1:08 pm

How about use a number, like “5 ways to …”

People like actionable titles.

Mike

10 Todd September 19, 2006 at 1:13 pm

“A great headline mixed with a lame opening is like inviting someone into your house, only to slam the door in their face as they approach.”

Wouldn’t it be more like inviting someone into your home only to show them to the basement? Or inviting them through your front door only to show them out the back door?

11 Brian September 19, 2006 at 1:19 pm

Todd, well… I don’t know.

The analogy I used worked for me because a reader who clicks away before getting “in” to the meat of your content has never really made it through the door at all.

So your bad opening really is “closing the door” on the reader, metaphorically speaking of course. :)

12 Tony D. Clark September 19, 2006 at 2:07 pm

I have a 6th one for you. Use a cartoon!

Since I illustrate my posts with my cartoons, I try to use them to make the post more interesting. I’ve played around with the placement, and based on the readers I’ve talked with it seems to be working. Most seem to go Headline > Cartoon > Opening paragraph. I try to make the drawing interesting enough to make them want to read (or continue reading).

Then again, I could just be fooling myself ;) I’m learning and making it up as I go along.

13 Brian September 19, 2006 at 2:11 pm

Tony, I agree. A captivating photo or illustration can really help. I need to use more of them here myself.

14 Rosano Coutinho September 19, 2006 at 3:34 pm

I hate to say it but I didn’t read your intro, I just went to the 5 points. It’s good to know that you used all of them though :)

15 Brian September 19, 2006 at 3:45 pm

Ha ha ha… that happens a lot with list posts, which is another reason I made the closing reference the opening. :)

16 Dominic September 19, 2006 at 4:08 pm

Is asking the question at the end an example of a good way to close a blog post?
I guess it is since I’m commenting and will probably link to it :)

17 ross September 19, 2006 at 5:44 pm

man…you’re just too good!

18 chartreuse September 19, 2006 at 6:19 pm

This was an important post.
I like to tease folks in my openings. I guess that’s number…um…

19 Brian September 19, 2006 at 6:59 pm

1, 3 or 4 Char, unless it’s a Paris Hilton post, in which case it’s 2. :)

20 Roberta Rosenberg September 19, 2006 at 7:59 pm

#1 is my favorite opener and I’d agree with Schwartz (and who wouldn’t), the first paragraph sets up EVERYTHING else that follows. It gives the reader the proper context from which to proceed.

21 Dave Navarro September 19, 2006 at 8:24 pm

Great post, Brian. I consider this to be more of a “checklist” post than a “list” post because it’s a great pre-flight checklist for EVERY blog post. It’s important to remember that taking the time to make sure your post is polished goes a long way towards getting it read (and, as importantly, linked to).

Keep up the rockin’ work –

Dave

22 Joseph Ferrara.sellsius September 19, 2006 at 8:49 pm

Don’t you ever run out of great material? Thanks again for the simple truth. As others have suggested, photos/images can also have enormous impact. This would be an interesting test: Just post a headline and an image and see what happens. Anyone ever try it?

23 Steve Olson September 19, 2006 at 9:48 pm

I found you through Problogger Group Writing Project. You are good! I’ll be back.

Thanks,
Steve

24 Jim Messenger September 19, 2006 at 11:18 pm

Brian,

Your blog has been a favorite of mine for quite some time. As of tomorrow it will be required reading for all staff members.

Thanks for the great work.

Jim

25 John Dowdell September 19, 2006 at 11:31 pm

I don’t like posts which start catchy, yet empty.

I like posts which tell me, up front, what I’ll learn from reading the rest of the stuff.

Get to the point, right up front. Then you can tease me to read more.

But first I have to know why I should invest in reading your text.

Thanks for letting me vent. ;-)

26 Andrew September 20, 2006 at 12:21 am

Great post, I too came via Problogger, and I will definitely be returning.

27 Steven Aitchison September 20, 2006 at 12:42 am

Some good points in the post. I think until one gets established it is worth noting every point on how to grab readers attention. Once established people tend to read posts regardless.

28 Miha September 20, 2006 at 2:09 am

No. 1 – opening with a question always works good for me.

29 Alvin September 20, 2006 at 3:44 am

Love your tips! Following your tips have led me to a tighter and leaner writing.

Maybe you could do 5 simple ways to *end* your posts with a bang next :)

30 Hendry Lee September 20, 2006 at 4:26 am

Brian, great post.

And Rosano is right too.

Sometimes people stop at the first picture, or subhead. If you provide numbered points, they might as well stop at the first to see what you have to offer.

For example, because you use h3 tags for your points, what I immediately notice is 1. Ask a question, after the title.

That aside, there is logically no where else to capture reader’s attention other than the headline and opening paragraph.

Just another list to print and stick on the wall. ;)

31 Dale Cruse September 20, 2006 at 6:18 am

Advanced journalists are taught never to use the question lead (#1). As an example:

“Do you ever wonder about paper clips?”

If the answer is “no,” then you’ve lost the reader already.

While I freely admit that blog writing isn’t necessarily journalism, I believe the concept still applies.

32 Brian September 20, 2006 at 6:27 am

Dale, it doesn’t.

In blogging, as in copywriting, you have to know your audience. Unlike general journalism, you should always know what kind of question will catch your intended audience’s attention, or you’re missing something very important.

33 J David September 20, 2006 at 7:17 am

Great post. I have been trying to find ways to boost readership for my site and I just found this site, so I will look around here to see what I can dig up. Hopefully, my writing will improve… sigh…

34 Glenn (Customer Service Experience)Ross September 20, 2006 at 9:31 am

Brian, great post. I linked to it on my blog network’s wiki. I also agree with John in that I want to know up front what’s relevant. I think you can do that with your tips. I find my posts getting shorter as time goes by (it’s the Seth Godin influence) and, practicing what you preach, I hope more relevant.

35 Easton Ellsworth September 20, 2006 at 10:06 am

Brian, great post. Here’s what I think – a thousand blog posts have already shared the same or extremely similar tips to your above – but you are a master at framing the words and ideas so as to stick in people’s minds and impel them to discuss. Thus it’s original and fresh and rewarding all at once. Thank you!

My Yoda PEZ dispenser bows reverently to you :) .

36 Lino Resende September 20, 2006 at 11:26 am

Good tips and great post. I always think that using simple words is more efecttive.
Thank you for the advise.

37 Latest News September 20, 2006 at 12:00 pm

Nice articles for blog posting , please also provide more articles on blog posting

38 Riihele September 22, 2006 at 5:28 am

Hei Brian.
Brilliant tips that remind me of school and the essay writing as these exact same ones we were adviced to apply in our writing. Take care. =)

39 Teresa Boardman September 22, 2006 at 7:45 am

I am so bad at writing headline that I have to write my peice and then go back and figure out what to call it. headlines are hard because you only get a few words.

40 triticale September 23, 2006 at 9:22 pm

The thing is that statistics aren’t shocking anymore. Everyone knows that 41.7% of them are inaccurate.

41 Carol October 3, 2006 at 4:28 pm

Thanks for this post. I’m seriously interested in improving my blog(s), so will be checking back often. I’ve always liked the power of questions, but now I’m going to add quotes and shocking statistics to my real estate blog.

42 john October 15, 2006 at 1:10 am

I like your idea about your title asking a question. i think i will try that thanks.

43 Adeolu Akinyemi November 19, 2006 at 6:04 am

I’ve been sneaking in and out of here for a while now, you are really very good. These tips also do not just work for writing alone, they work for speaking as well.

By re-modelling your tips for speaking, I could begin to sound like an authority in the topic :) Any copyright issues to this :)

Don’t mind my sense of humor. Just to let you know that I really find your site useful…both as a writer and a speaker.

44 Kiran November 29, 2006 at 2:15 pm

As a total novice in the art of blogging (corporate or otherwise!) I am delighted I’ve stumbled across your site!

I have been asking numerous questions for a while….those that know anything seem to know that we should be blogging….but nobody could tell me how!

You’ve answered the numerous questions I had, and made me realise how much I didn’t know that I didn’t know (if you get what I mean!!).

You are ace…..thank you.

Needless to say, I have subscribed. And shall be recommending others to do so too.

45 Blogscapes December 11, 2006 at 8:50 am

This is my first time reading your blog. Thanks for the useful tips. I realised that the tips for blogging are pretty much the same as tips for good writing! Will be adding your blog to my blogroll as I think my readers can benefit from reading your blog. cheers.

46 bintar December 14, 2006 at 12:24 am

mm.. it is my first also. But it is shocking, questioning, invoking minds. Thanks for this information

47 Dr. Laureen March 4, 2007 at 6:57 pm

Thank you so much – these are excellent tips. My blog is only a few months old, but these tips have helped me to better structure and provide information. I like the idea about sharing an ancedote or quote. I blog about “how to marketing”. Your infomation is on target – it has made a difference for me.
http://www.bizmarketingsolutions.biz

48 IXLD Media March 18, 2007 at 3:34 am

This is great stuff. Thank you for your valuable tips, I’m going back to the drawing board to implement some of these strategies on my own blogs.

49 Jeremy Kandah March 29, 2007 at 4:08 pm

I agree. Loads of blogs carry “useless” information though. Don’t expect people to come unless you have interesting content.

50 Adrian April 2, 2007 at 7:55 pm

These tips actually summarize the best methods of catching the eye of a visitor. Everyone should respect these! Good post!

51 LitPark May 16, 2007 at 12:52 pm

Hey, cool blog. I found you through Jason Boog’s Publishing Spot.

52 Shypy June 6, 2007 at 11:04 am

Vintage Copyblogger.

I was reading the list, and remembering where you had used them.

Finally, a guru who practices what he preaches.

One question – Did you write the opening first or the list? Haha.

Shypy = Reader no 18687

53 soccer June 21, 2007 at 4:13 pm

Well , these are amazing 5 tips. Thanks for them.

54 cheer leading July 7, 2007 at 6:16 pm

These tips actually summarize the best methods of catching the eye of a visitor. Everyone should respect these! Good post!

55 nancy July 11, 2007 at 1:40 pm

Great post. I also found the comments informative and esp. liked the comment by Mike giving illustrations to the 5 openings.

56 Lorelei July 13, 2007 at 6:55 pm

I know this is a rather old article but I wanted to thank you for such a useful post, it’s an amazing guide not only to writing an informative posts but also to *composing* it the right way, which unfortunately many bloggers fail.

57 Lokesh July 14, 2007 at 8:20 am

You have taken time to write this tricky post,i liked it .”Invoke the Mind’s Eye” ….its too catchy,

58 Glenn -- Write for Blogs July 18, 2007 at 7:21 pm

I’d add personalization to the good openings list. “Joe Jones came home to an eviction notice …” “My pal Al made $1,000 just by …” “My wife walked in red-faced, holding a traffic ticket …”

Starting off with a quote or a question are among the cliches most good writers try to avoid when writing leads. Anything can work, of course, but for these two I think you really want to ponder other approaches.

When someone asks a question in a headline or a lead, I wonder why they’re me asking me.

Stats are another suspect opening in my book.

59 Brian Clark July 18, 2007 at 8:12 pm

“Personalization” is a story, or anecdote, Glenn. See number 2.

As for your other comments, well, you sound like a wannabe journalist. And we’re not talking journalism here.

Good luck with your blog.

60 Nancy Standlee August 2, 2007 at 9:12 am

Do you like art blogs? It just so happens I’ve been blogging about a month now and use FeedBlitz for my subscription system also. I like your suggestion of placing a Subscribe to Nancy Standlee Art Blog at the end of each post. Please tell me how to do that, please, please? I’ve already subscribed to your blog so I can’t use that as a bargaining chip. I hope you like art blogs! See you around, ns

61 Brian Clark August 2, 2007 at 9:17 am

Nancy, you just create a new page on your blog, paste the code Feedblitz gives you into that page to create an email subscribe form, and link to the page from the bottom of each post.

Hope this helps!

62 Arnold August 2, 2007 at 9:57 am

These are very good suggestions on how to give your posts an extra “zing”. Thank you for sharing!

http://streetjesus.blogspot.com

63 Mike Holman August 4, 2007 at 12:45 am

Thanks again for the recommendations , great for helping me starting my new/first site.

64 Kim September 8, 2007 at 1:51 pm

Awesome post! You definitely have a way with words.

65 Adam September 15, 2007 at 1:21 am

Great post, you taught me something! =)

66 Kevin October 9, 2007 at 8:14 pm

Hi,

Thanks a lot for the tips, especially the one on”using an analogy, metaphor or simile”. I have a blog called Eclectic Grooves which is primarily based on music. Can you take a look on my blog and give me some honest feedback on it? For ex: what type of elements are strong as well as what things could use some improvement. I have been running this site for almost a year and haven’t received much traffic. Please offer any suggestions for increasing the traffic of my blog.

http://eclectic-grooves.blogspot.com

Thanks, Kevin

67 Jonathan Arevalo October 24, 2007 at 7:45 pm

Do you mind giving some tips on ENDING with a BANG?

68 Rose Peasley RE/MAX November 2, 2007 at 5:17 pm

WOW…I absolutely loved and appreciated your tips. I am just getting started in the “Blogging” world and found your tips to be very informative. Thank you!

69 James November 21, 2007 at 11:59 am

I am a Blog virgin- you have shown me the way!
I’ll be up late tonight working on some great material!
thanks guys :-)

70 Marianna November 22, 2007 at 9:57 am

How about the very first post of your brand new blog???????????
Im starting one and im stuck the last,,, hours,, thinking on the title and the first welcome post!! The blog belongs to the company i work and im in charge of it!
So any tips?

71 Matt November 25, 2007 at 4:49 pm

Good points, very often I get tangled up in design and technology with the content suffering.

72 c4 November 30, 2007 at 9:36 am

These are basically the same techniques you learn in English classes about writing a hook for an intro to a paper, but way less boring–you should really consider compiling some of the posts on this site into a college textbook.

73 sveta November 30, 2007 at 1:50 pm

i love this site.

74 Saim January 2, 2008 at 3:36 am

I start the post like that but seem to lose my way in the middle it will definitely help.Thanks for another nice post.

75 Saad Baig January 2, 2008 at 3:37 am

This blog is becoming my teacher for blogging.Nice ways to write a post.

76 Creative web design January 14, 2008 at 11:33 am

Thanks for the tips, will implement on my blog

77 Tom February 9, 2008 at 5:12 am

An Useful article. Thanks for it….and I hope the theme you use on this blog is free :)

78 lamine youvey February 12, 2008 at 3:00 pm

it is a pleasue to read this tips ,it is very intersting ,thanks for sharing information

79 John Hoff February 15, 2008 at 2:59 pm

Like Eugene Schwartz, I spend a great deal of time writing a blog article. I think about every sentence I write.

I wonder, how long does it take Brian to write an article?

80 Web Analytics Service April 7, 2008 at 1:47 am

These are basically the same techniques you learn in English classes about writing a hook for an intro to a paper.

81 Chantal-Jocelyne May 1, 2008 at 3:56 am

“Chantallyne entre fogones!”
Thanks for the information. I think it’s wonderful to learn “blogging” on the Net, while i practise my english writing! Because, I’m french, I’m learning english to can write a spanish blog! Life is wonderful!!!…

82 buyandsellnumberplates May 13, 2008 at 5:44 pm

WOW- great advice
I’m a blogging virgin- but not for long!
thanks again
James.

83 Rob May 25, 2008 at 8:17 am

Interesting post.

84 buy and sell number plates July 15, 2008 at 5:00 pm

I keep coming back to this post to help me put some pep into my copy

thanks again guys ;-)

85 sunil August 5, 2008 at 1:51 pm

haha.. nice post.. with nice closing lines.. this surely will help me post better.. thnx

86 Jules August 27, 2008 at 8:19 pm

Spending a week on the first 50 words is a situation that is all too familiar :( … Great job implementing your own advice by the way!

The point with which I agree the most is your bonus tip, the ending tied to the beginning works really well not only in blogs but in other types of writing as well. In fact, I saw a stand up comedian last night who did it in his gig and I thought, “wow, what a great way to wrap up the show.”

87 Sharlin kaur August 28, 2008 at 12:31 am

I have a question If I create a blog then what is the use of that? Any specific reason to open a blog. Can we earn from the blog?

88 Saim Baig October 14, 2008 at 7:24 am

Nice tips.These little things work great.Let me try them.

89 christmas flowers October 31, 2008 at 12:51 am

I hope all these points will work out. I will also implement all these five points. Thanks for knowledge sharing.

90 Valeria | TimelessLessons November 7, 2008 at 12:18 pm

Some good points in the post. I think until one gets established it is worth noting every point on how to grab readers attention. Once established people tend to read posts regardless.

91 Linda December 6, 2008 at 5:41 pm

I’m a reporter and in media we have very little time to capture reader imagination. So it really has to happen in the first paragraph or your cause is lost!

92 Atlanta Wedding Photographer December 18, 2008 at 5:23 pm

I’ll be honest with you…i didn’t know that i would be interested in this blog….however, these simple ways and everything else have me coming back…the reason….I can sure use this in my posts….thanks again

93 Frank December 24, 2008 at 4:16 pm

Have been reading your blog for a while,
Very Interesting & creative!

94 Make money online with a 17 year old kid December 31, 2008 at 10:30 am

Hi Roberta,
This is my visit to this website and I have well understood why this site is among the top 100 blogs in Technorati. I am not able to leave the site because every time I finish reading a post great post I see the popular posts section in the right which interests me to read more and I am not regretting at all.
Thsi post was a great one too.

Regards
Laksh

95 Hamilton Wallace January 2, 2009 at 11:18 am

Good stuff. Ironic how today we must all become writers if we are to participate in the new media. Another copywriting tip that comes to mind: use simple words. This doesn’t mean dumbing something down. It means writing with words that tend to be shorter, simpler and clearer, not deploying a communication strategy that is consistent with and sustains the external branding elements of your overall strategy.

96 Naomi Trower January 16, 2009 at 4:19 pm

Ok I’m addicted to this site now. I can’t stop reading all of these great posts. My head is spinning in an attempt to take all these steps down for my future posts. Thanks!

97 Isaac Yassar February 3, 2009 at 11:59 pm

The combination between the first and the third is my favorite. To measure the result, you have to feel it yourself. What do you think?

98 Louver February 10, 2009 at 12:44 am

#1 and 5 works best I think.

99 Kari February 11, 2009 at 12:06 am

I’m sitting here grinning. I’m about to add a blog to my website so finding this one … was meant to be! I can’t write more, because I want to read more of the posts! LOL

100 Homestead Users February 22, 2009 at 4:49 pm

I am so new to all of this writing stuff. This is an extremely helpful article. Can you tell that I usually just start writing what ever comes to mind without really even thinking about what’s going to keep the readers attention?

I’m going to study theses suggestions very closely and start implementing the ideas into my posts.

Thanks for a great article. By the way which of the two suggestions did I use in my comment?

101 Gerry from GerryWalter.com February 24, 2009 at 11:04 pm

Yes – you are so right – it is about how you say it. Writing carefully is the key to doubling your visitors.

102 high fiver March 3, 2009 at 1:43 pm

Usually i get straight to the point and give the material that matters quickly. Even if my posts are short.

103 Chris Anderson March 12, 2009 at 1:45 am

Thank you for your post.
I’m going to try this immediately, and hope it works! I post just earlier to a different post, and am trying like crazy to build a viral blog and content system.
thanks,
Chris@LetsGoBanners.com

104 VlogHog March 28, 2009 at 2:57 am

I love lists. Make all of your blog posts lists.

105 calabria property April 4, 2009 at 8:18 am

I have just finished a great book by direct mail king Drayton Bird. The general principals of good copy seem to have changed little over the last 30 years.

The beauty of current digital media is that it is measurable beyond our wildest dreams.

This is a great site with good principles, some really magnetic blog titles included that really pull the reader in.

106 Big Robby April 5, 2009 at 1:30 pm

Great article. I think it’s important to look at the way the newspapers have been doing it for years. It’s always the same, and for good reason.

107 kingsley April 9, 2009 at 11:43 am

I have been a fan of copy blogger for a while now and i must say my online writing skill was honed at this site.

Sure going to apply one or two of the tips in this article immediately.

Thanks for staying true.

108 Albenei Sekhose April 19, 2009 at 5:22 pm

I found your blog online today, and this article about how to start your blog was so helpfull, since i just launched my blog today. Thanks for the advice and i’ll keep on reading your blog regularly. Feel free to give me any tips you can :)

Thanks

109 Andy May 2, 2009 at 8:22 am

Out of your 5 tips, which do you think is the most effective?

I’m sure you know my preference. Great post!

110 Office Humorist May 2, 2009 at 12:01 pm

I see what you did there. Clever!

111 Michelle Pippin June 2, 2009 at 9:18 am

Brian, awesome post!! I think the WORST “sin” we can commit as entreprenuers is boring our market…. We can literally bore them to death and never recover! One of the most successful (i.e. profitable) “blog posts” I have ever done was called, “Market Like a Hooker” and drove people back to my website to download the ONLY business report based on the marketing tactics of prostitutes and drug dealers. It was fun and caught attention!! Thanks again, I am loving copyblogger!

112 sebastian June 16, 2009 at 5:14 pm

“meditate on this I will” :D

113 Work At Home Dude June 16, 2009 at 8:20 pm

This is great advice. I feel everyone should blog like they speak and be as personable as possible. Having your own voice. But like writing, the more you blog ,the better you get!

114 Justin June 16, 2009 at 9:32 pm

Great ideas for blogging. You have touched some good points here.

115 Linda June 22, 2009 at 8:40 am

Asking a question is always a good opener. It makes the reader want to keep going.

116 cara membuat website June 29, 2009 at 11:32 pm

I like to use an openning question also in blog post.

117 Lynn July 19, 2009 at 7:57 pm

I like the shocking statistic method, personally, but asking a shocking question is just as good!

Your advice on writing is a great refresher for us old journalism majors. Thanks!

118 ProTuningLab July 24, 2009 at 7:48 pm

Great info on how to write a good blog. I look forward on reading more info here

119 Shafar July 31, 2009 at 1:54 pm

Often I use the first one (Asking a Question).

Thanks for the tips! :)

120 Dhane Diesil August 12, 2009 at 1:48 am

Thanks for another dose of greatness!

121 isaiah mweteri maithulia August 17, 2009 at 3:37 am

Your tips are like dry grass that rekindles a dying fire. Wonderful!

122 consacepo August 23, 2009 at 4:19 pm

thanks for this article.. Sometimes many pictures may draw off the attention.

123 Brett Burky August 24, 2009 at 2:51 pm

I like the idea. Now looking over my posts I am not sure I do that. But I will have to start implementing that into my writing. I don’t know why I never put that together myself. It has the simple AIDA principle all through it.

Attention, Interest, Decision, Action.

I think I have just found my favorite blog :)

124 Drew Clement August 27, 2009 at 7:57 am

It blows my mind how simple and easy it can be to write in a way that intrigues, attracts and maintains interest. Yet so many of us fail to do it. I would like to delve deeper into the issue of why we do not do it?
Are we taught in school how to write in a boring and mild fashion? Are we so worried about what other people are going to think of our ideas, opinions or outlandish comments? Or are we all in too much of a rush to get our content out there and meet our blogging “schedule” that it just feels better or post than to post something of relevance?

I would say I am a victim of all three. Shame, shame, shame. Forget quantity and post quality. Right?

125 sambootech September 21, 2009 at 5:33 pm

Nice looking themes !

126 ravi September 23, 2009 at 2:23 pm

“A great headline mixed with a lame opening is like inviting someone into your house, only to slam the door in their face as they approach.”

Wouldn’t it be more like inviting someone into your home only to show them to the basement? Or inviting them through your front door only to show them out the back door?

127 ebuy777 September 26, 2009 at 6:09 am

But how to let others find your blog ?

128 Jon October 1, 2009 at 10:10 pm

Great information for new bloggers. Thanks for the post, insight, and help. Now I just need to rewrite all of my blog entries.

129 rsc October 2, 2009 at 11:11 pm

Thanks for these tips! I always forget how powerful simple words can be

130 Chiara Bolognini October 3, 2009 at 9:56 am

Great post to keep as a reference. It confirms part of my idea and give new insights.

131 Adarsh October 3, 2009 at 10:43 am

Opening the blog with a bang is a great thing. I have had success with the question type opening. i have noticed that all the posts I open with questions gets comments which those trying to solve a problem gets little or no comments. Most of the comments I get are “Ya I agree” type

132 Paul Counts October 8, 2009 at 5:20 am

I never actually thought of the opening of a blog post as being as important as it really is. The question idea is perfect because it grabs their attention right out of the shoot. Thanks for the great tips in this post.

133 Rishabh Dev October 13, 2009 at 1:04 am

Great Post! I did use the 2nd one a bit… will be trying em out… :)

134 Carrie Bailey October 13, 2009 at 4:03 pm

Love it. I’m going to use this on my next post.

135 Oleg Mokhov October 15, 2009 at 1:00 pm

Hey Brian,

The best opening draws a reader in and quickly lets them know what they’re about to read.

A question makes them think and curious to find the answer in your article. A quote supports your argument, making what you’re about to say more credible.

An analogy helps the reader to really understand something, since they connect the dots with an example they understand, rather than only having something abstract to figure out.

Thanks for sharing these simple but effective tips. I try to incorporate these in all my articles on my site Lifebeat, hopefully making them enticing, remarkable, and personable.

Oleg

136 inmobiliaria madrid November 26, 2009 at 10:21 am

I think, while writing a blog post, it hardly matters what you like, but, it is that what others like. So, before writing any post, I get an idea by searching through Google keyword analysis tool that what people are looking for and more eager to know. Then, I usually go for that.

137 Financial Samurai November 27, 2009 at 12:48 am

Great tips! I try to use them all in every single one of my posts. Need some interest and controversy.

138 Sell My Number Plate November 30, 2009 at 6:54 pm

Great article, I’m new to blogging and thought about paying someone to post for me, but won’t need to now, thanks!

139 Julian F December 12, 2009 at 5:22 pm

Thanks for all blog tips, in my opinion are all very important and new for me!

140 Roschelle January 7, 2010 at 11:11 am

Wow! You really did make this one easy. I’m always amazed at how simple things can be once they’re laid out by someone else….

141 OpenBlog January 19, 2010 at 3:40 am

You got me man… When I finished reading the last paragraph I literally went back to beginning to check your 5 points out… nice work

142 Tom January 20, 2010 at 4:58 pm

Really good post. Many people focus on the title, but the first few lines really have to engage the reader. Especially in these days where people’s attentions spans are decreasing to 140 chars or less!

143 Travis2020 January 25, 2010 at 1:08 pm

Thanks for laying it out so simple. You gave me a nice foundation to work from .

144 Website Promotion Blog January 30, 2010 at 1:14 am

AS a blogger, you’re going to write about some points. Obviously your post is about something p- one thing that your readers may need. Therefore, it’s obvious that you ask them a question to provoke a need in what you tell them. So, I don’t see any problem with asking questions.

Actually, it’s very usefu l to remind them of the importantce of what you’re going to elaborate for your readers.

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