Don’t Read This (or the Kitty Gets It)!

by Brian Clark

Copywriting 101

Poor Fluffy. I asked you not to do this, and you’ve gone and broken the rules.

Things don’t look good for this cute little kitten I’ve taken hostage in case my demands were not met. She is awfully sweet, though.

We’ll just have to wait until later on in the article to decide the fate of Fluffy. But first, we really do need to discuss the ultimate goal of good copywriting.

Stick with me and I’ll go easy on the cat, deal?

Let’s get started. What is the primary purpose of any piece of writing that you put out online — whether a blog post, a networking email, a sales letter or a tutorial?

For starters, to get what you’ve written read, right?

Makes sense.

So, what’s the primary purpose of your headline, your graphics, your fonts, and every other part of the content?

The simple, surprising answer is…

To get the first sentence read.

This may seem somewhat simplistic to you. Or maybe even confusing.

For me, I came across this way of looking at copywriting later in my studies. I had spent plenty of time trying to master the art of writing a perfect headline, or properly conveying product benefits, or learning how to craft a compelling call to action.

But it all came together for me when legendary copywriter and direct marketer Joe Sugarman shared his secret for becoming a great copywriter:

Every element of copy has just one purpose — to get the first sentence read.

In his seminars, Sugarman would quiz his students on the purpose of various copy elements: the headline, the graphics, the sub-headlines, etc. Why are they important?

“What is the purpose of a headline?” Sugarman would ask.

Every time the student started with some complicated, jargon-filled explanation, he would cut them off.

“The purpose is to get the first sentence read,” he would counter.

“And the purpose of the first sentence is to get the second sentence read,” he continued.

And so on, down a slippery slide that leads to your offer and the sale.

This is an extremely valuable way to go about structuring any writing, and it’s crucial to writing intended to persuade or sell. Many times we find ourselves so eager to arrive at our conclusion that we forget that the essence of making a persuasive point (or causing any action) is how we get there.

Step by step.

Now… how do we get there?

With this simple framework in mind, the stage is set for drilling down deeper into the nitty gritty of the “step by step.” We’re now in a better position to more fully appreciate the specific techniques that apply to all of the various elements of strong copy.

For example, we can now see:

  • why a strong, compelling headline is critical;
  • why immediately focusing on the benefit to the reader is so crucial;
  • why you must make a promise to the reader that you later fulfill; and
  • why you must back up everything you’ve said with very specific proof.

If no one reads, all is lost.

And the key to getting someone to read is one sentence at a time, so compelled by that sentence that they want to read the next. In other words, how you say it is how you get there.

This is the first of the 10-part “Copywriting 101 series” From here we’ll examine the core principles and elements that take a reader from the first sentence to the sale, subscription, download or other action.

And while I did get you to read this entire article, I wouldn’t exactly recommend the strategy employed here. It worked, but pulling cheap stunts like this won’t help you in the long run.

Besides… my four year old daughter staged a daring rescue of the kitten when I wasn’t looking.

Kids!

Go back to the Copywriting 101 series.

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1 Sam February 16, 2006 at 11:37 am

Ahhh — the old reverse psychology angle! :)

2 Lux February 28, 2006 at 11:07 pm

Just found your site — very sound advice and very vividly explained! I’ve just subscribed and can’t wait for more (I’ve almost finished reading what’s up here so far :) ). Cheers! -Lux

3 Jay March 7, 2006 at 6:58 am

Your articles keep getting better.

http://www.ncrealestateblog.com

4 Gary Paul May 3, 2006 at 3:39 am

Excellent points presented by someone who clearly knows what they’re talking about.

There’s been plenty written on the subject of “hooks” and “killer titles”, but it’s still always refreshing to read a post by someone who can present clearly and concisely why this is essential and hwo to do it.

5 David Njau May 6, 2006 at 8:07 am

Good site. Isn’t it funny how education is never ending. Thank God for dear Internet, am learning something every day.

6 Static Brain May 24, 2006 at 3:20 am

helpful advice on blogging. I am reading the rest of it now.

7 Susan Weiner October 17, 2006 at 6:33 pm

Your headline is priceless!

8 Brendan February 13, 2007 at 2:03 am

Great headline, good article. What I’m missing, however, is a step by step process, in which you would walk a reader through the steps of generating a headline similar to the one you used. I’m sure there’s much more to it than getting your customers to “read your first sentence”. Otherwise, look forward to reading your future posts!

9 Leal March 16, 2007 at 8:55 pm

People need a teacher at times, and I have found a one. Your articles are very educational in every sense of the word, for you put sense in copywriting.

10 Rian March 20, 2007 at 1:45 am

Brian,
Have you studied anything by John Carlton? I’ve heard nothing but good things, and just want to learn from the best. I’ve looked at purchasing his materials, still deciding on the 2K price tag. Any other recommendations?

11 wen June 8, 2007 at 4:41 am

hi brian nice tips…

12 Jackie Anderson June 23, 2007 at 4:11 pm

Copywriting 101, is a great tutorial. I stumbled upon your site today and I was reminded of a cliche that I’ve heard on many occassions “when the student is ready the teacher will appear”, need I say more!

13 Jeremy July 28, 2007 at 9:10 am

Jackie,

Great point – I had stumbled across copyblogger a couple of times in the past, thinking it was just an average ‘me too’ site (linked from ProBlogger), but just yesterday started to look more closely and found this to probably be the most useful site available on how to write good copy for one’s blog.

Excellent work, Brian – looking forward to a lot more additional and useful content.

14 mohammed September 2, 2007 at 2:34 pm

this guys a genius! please be my mentor!!

15 John October 3, 2007 at 3:48 pm

I guess that makes sense… If the headline and the first sentence does not grab the readers attention, then the rest of the story is useless… Interesting…

16 Arif Vakil January 7, 2008 at 9:09 pm

Hi Brian,

I’ve been a reader and fan of copyblogger since I’ve stumbled across it. Have been immersed in your latest posts and did not venture beyond. But now that I have, there’s treasure lying in your earlier posts too.

Looking forward to peacefully complete and apply all the principles in Copywriting 101.

Thanks Brian, keep blogging.

17 Jason February 11, 2008 at 4:51 pm

Hi there. I’ve stumbled across Copyblogger in the past and shrugged. Now I’m all about studying copywriting and I see it’s power.

I can’t believe the wealth of copywriting information you have on this blog. There are a lot of direct response techniques I’ve been wanting to learn from all kinds of copy-masters, but I’m sure a lot of those teachings are within these pages.

I’m looking forward to reading your blog like a kid in a candy shop.

See ya,

Jason

18 Dan McCord April 14, 2008 at 4:58 am

You say you don’t recommend the Kitty Gets It strategy. Well the January ‘73 issue of National Lampoon magazine “If You Don’t Buy This Magazine, We’ll Kill This Dog”, is the American Society of Magazine Editors 7th best magazine cover of the last 40 years. It also got my attention enough that it was the first issue I ever bought! Maybe cheap stunts DO work!

Thanks
Dan

19 Tony Dovale September 19, 2008 at 10:23 am

Thanks for this, probably the most important tip!

NOW… I’m going to make sure I get to the top of the results for client conversions for my team building and public speaking site.

Thanks a million – and it’s FREE. Perfect.

Namaste’

Tony Dovale
http://www.lifemasters.co.za
http://www.Team-Building.za.net

20 Dee yan October 8, 2008 at 12:23 am

I broke the rule not to read, but i’m lucky could read this idea, thanks Brian.

21 Party Plan Pat November 5, 2008 at 2:00 am

I appreciate the massive value you give. I come here often to get inspired when I experience writers block. Thank you so much!

22 Shall Xu December 24, 2008 at 11:17 am

I spend much time here looking through your articles as careful as possible which help me a lot on blogging

English is not my native language,so I just try my best to read and write correctly

PS:is it ok to translate some of your article into Chinese?

23 Freedrinx April 13, 2009 at 5:48 pm

Thank you so much for a simple approach to a complicated subject. You had me at Kitty.

24 nancy June 19, 2009 at 1:43 pm

Just ran across this article and had to send it to the other copywriters in my marketing/advertising teams. Love reading your stuff–keep doing what you do!

25 online broker August 11, 2009 at 3:49 pm

hm, I never realised that it is so important to get the first sentence read, but makes sense when I think about it. Gotta look through my sites now and optimize that.

26 Stephen August 23, 2009 at 10:45 pm

i think i have been on this site in the past, but now i find myself on it again and this time i think i will be staying for a while. i recently discovered that copywriting is kinda fun, especially when you are getting paid to do it. – Stephen

27 Randy/http://randybeckett.com September 3, 2009 at 2:06 pm

Looking forward to taking the 101 course. It’s ok that you suckered me in with the cat. Sometime you JUST need to get people to act.

28 Web Design Norwich November 12, 2009 at 7:49 am

I can’t resist a title with “don’t” in it, though glad fluffy made it ok despite my curiosity. Hope reading the copywriting-101 is going to help alleviate my writers block.

29 Eileen DeLoughery November 27, 2009 at 4:11 pm

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The link goes to glyphius.com, and my browser alerts me that this is a reported attack site.
(NOT FOR POSTING)

30 Matt Pattinson (copywriter) February 1, 2010 at 12:12 pm

Sugarman really hit the nail on the head when he underscored the need for copywriters to get the first sentence read.

You can have the fanciest fridge in the world but if it’s empty, what’s the point?

Really enjoying the site and flicking through your animated and informative content. Cheers

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