Comments on: Landing Page Makeover Clinic #10: HowtoWriteBio.com

By: ravi

ravi — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 12:15:44 +0000

Yes, I believe I already pointed out most of those issues, if not a few more

By: Roberta Rosenberg

Roberta Rosenberg — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 16:37:40 +0000

@Sam – thank YOU for the more-than-generous kudo! I’m overwhelmed, in a quirky sort of way

By: Sam Mutimer

Sam Mutimer — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 16:21:01 +0000

Can I hear a WHOOP WHOOP! I am leaping like a deer right now and have the energy of a 10 cans of redbull!Woohaarr!!!

Roberta Rosenberg, you are a silky smooth, heart pumping, awesome injection giving human being! I have read many a marketing blog in my day and this exceeds everything I have soaked up so far!Why? You are so generous with your content-tips and tricks plus you have a catchy/ quirky personality! Love it! You are now NUMBER ONE in my blog subscriber listings!Keep rocking this social media space MRS!

High fives
Sam Mutimer
http://thinktankmedia.com.au/

By: Roberta Rosenberg

Roberta Rosenberg — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 02:29:30 +0000

Barbra, thanks for the update. It’s always good to hear when folks continue to benefit from their makeovers!

By: Barbra Sundquist, Bio Writer

Barbra Sundquist, Bio Writer — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 21:12:16 +0000

Hi Roberta, a quick update to let you know that thanks to your critique I revamped my site and the sales continue to increase each month. Thank you again.

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By: NDK Creative Artist

NDK Creative Artist — Mon, 14 Jan 2008 00:46:22 +0000

Superb article, I’ve been following Marketing Sherpa (among others) for a long time and learned heaps, thanks so much for continuing to provide valuable information all these years – it has been incredibly helpful and informed many projects.

By: Sam MacDonald

Sam MacDonald — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 19:03:02 +0000

These are some awesome tips not only for her website, but to consider for any web site and helps with working through issues as I’m building out some of my work.

Thanks

By: Sonia Simone

Sonia Simone — Sun, 13 Jan 2008 04:35:23 +0000

Barbra, you’re a great sport (and got a great critique).

Roberta’s point #1 is one of my consistent favorites, and one of the hardest things to do–put yourself out of the picture and focus on your customer.

I do sympathize with Barbra’s not wanting to do a typical yellow-highlighted, red-headlined squeeze page like millions of other horrible squeeze pages out there. But there are a lot of other options–for a good one, check out Brian’s free report that kicked off the Teaching Sells launch. No highlighting, but very solid persuasive structure.

I was impressed by the Marketing Sherpa link, btw. A very convincing endorsement by Seth Godin, not too shabby.