Comments on: Landing Page Makeover Clinic #11: RealEstateClientReferrals.com

By: Neil

Neil — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 19:14:03 +0000

Thanks for the post, I’ve just begun researching landing pages and this has been a great help. I will take all points into regard.

Thanks,
Neil.

By: Darius Wells

Darius Wells — Sat, 05 Dec 2009 04:01:03 +0000

This article is so good that I wished i had enough money to have her to write mines.

By: Seattle Web Design

Seattle Web Design — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 04:15:31 +0000

Thanks for the article. We’re not in real estate but we’ve taken a lot of tips on this landing page. Keep up the good work!

By: Casey Eberhart idealnetworker.com

Casey Eberhart idealnetworker.com — Sun, 26 Oct 2008 04:48:12 +0000

That was AWESOME! Thank you so much. Landing pages are new for me but you really made it look easy. Great makeover! Give someone an AWESOME day!

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By: Rockk

Rockk — Tue, 12 Feb 2008 05:04:15 +0000

What a terrific analysis of this site. Real Estate is a such a dynamic business that changes all the time depending on economic times. Your advice to keep the sales page current and to situations in todays market is spot on.

I will have to bookmark this site and check back oftern for great copywriting advice.

Thanks

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By: John Hoff

John Hoff — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 01:43:27 +0000

I’m a real estate investor and online entrepreneur based out of Las Vegas, NV (a hard hit area), so I found this article particularly interesting. There is A LOT of stuff on Sherice’s page. I didn’t read all of it because there’s just too much there. When I saw my scroll bar shrink to a small square I thought to myself, I’m too busy to read all this, I’ll just skim. I think Roberta is right on with the comments made above.

When I clicked over to your page I was left wondering who you were (your company)? And after reading the first headline I got the feeling that this was like one of those late night infomercials, I’m not sure if that’s what you were going for?

My eyes then skipped to the headlines only – so make those count (like mentioned in the post). Try skimming down your page and just read the headlines and big print. When you’re done, what have you learned about your site? I saw one headline that stopped me and grabbed my attention – “How Does Real Estate Client Referrals Compare to Other So-Called “Lead Generation” Services?”

But . . . I was let down. The answer is, “There is no comparison,” and that’s it? That tells me nothing about your company. Tell me why I should trust you other than showing me testimonials.

Also, it’s not immediately apparent who this is all for. I assume Real Estate Agents, but it doesn’t say for sure. Would you supply this to real estate investors as well? I invest but am not an agent. Is this something I could use?

Anyway, I wish you success in your ventures. I’m just offering up a perspective from a site visitor.

Good post.

By: Joseph bridges

Joseph bridges — Sat, 09 Feb 2008 22:48:09 +0000

As a realestate broker thanks for saying you need to reference todays market and make it risk free. My brother and I are much more apt to try something if we can try it for a smaller cost before the big bill. If the service works we have always upgraded.

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