Comments on: Landing Page Makeover Clinic #2: StartBreakingFree.com http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/ Copywriting and Content Marketing Strategies Tue, 16 Mar 2010 05:35:25 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Jennifer White http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-749819 Jennifer White Tue, 20 Oct 2009 02:22:16 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-749819 This is one of the best articles I've seen on the topic. Excellent resource for beginners and pros alike. Really great stuff and to the point. Thanks! This is one of the best articles I’ve seen on the topic. Excellent resource for beginners and pros alike. Really great stuff and to the point. Thanks!

]]> By: Webmarketing Blog http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-709267 Webmarketing Blog Fri, 28 Aug 2009 22:05:47 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-709267 Very nice topic! I'll follow! Very nice topic! I’ll follow!

]]> By: Joe Mudd http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-660485 Joe Mudd Sat, 04 Jul 2009 05:32:59 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-660485 Found this post from a link in another Copyblogger post, so I'm very late to the party here. The landing page has changed much in that time, but... The first thing I notice when going to the new landing page is a big ol' banner ad in the header for Rich Jerk. Please just sell me your book - not some third party product - especially the Rich Jerk. Don't give me an excuse to leave your page except to purchase your book. Another point - the original page had the guarantee isolated from the body copy with a colored background and a seal type image. Now it is just part of the body copy and doesn't stand out much. I'd bring back the colored background and seal image. I also notice the ebook price is now $7 higher. Bummer. Found this post from a link in another Copyblogger post, so I’m very late to the party here.

The landing page has changed much in that time, but…

The first thing I notice when going to the new landing page is a big ol’ banner ad in the header for Rich Jerk. Please just sell me your book – not some third party product – especially the Rich Jerk.

Don’t give me an excuse to leave your page except to purchase your book.

Another point – the original page had the guarantee isolated from the body copy with a colored background and a seal type image. Now it is just part of the body copy and doesn’t stand out much. I’d bring back the colored background and seal image.

I also notice the ebook price is now $7 higher. Bummer.

]]> By: françoise Olive http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-297961 françoise Olive Thu, 21 Feb 2008 14:09:29 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-297961 I wish I knew Maven. I could say same than him ,point for point, and even, we would agree on which type face to use. I will never be rich, and i am good at what I do But now, it doesn't matter even, for I refuse in principle to layout a page, where a client tells quite candidly that her creative Co provides a 360º service to her clients. As I am the only one working for her (e.g.:Ihave a 3 days a month retainer), how on earth is this true. It can't be. Me can't do everything well. But, i have broken free, and this is the most important thing I learned from the experience of 15 years in this trade. Forget about it, surf the net. I have no wings, so i am quite happy with just a feather attached to my hat I wish I knew Maven. I could say same than him ,point for point, and even, we would agree on which type face to use.
I will never be rich, and i am good at what I do
But now, it doesn’t matter even, for I refuse in principle to layout a page, where a client tells quite candidly that her creative Co provides a 360º service to her clients. As I am the only one working for her (e.g.:Ihave a 3 days a month retainer), how on earth is this true. It can’t be. Me can’t do everything well.
But, i have broken free, and this is the most important thing I learned from the experience of 15 years in this trade.
Forget about it, surf the net. I have no wings, so i am quite happy with just a feather attached to my hat

]]> By: A #1 Page Ranking On Google, and A Redesigned Sales Letter http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-93002 A #1 Page Ranking On Google, and A Redesigned Sales Letter Thu, 02 Aug 2007 01:31:33 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-93002 [...] a few days ago I redesigned the sales page for my book based on an extensive critique I had done (you can see the before pictures there). I’ll report back on the change in conversion rate in [...] [...] a few days ago I redesigned the sales page for my book based on an extensive critique I had done (you can see the before pictures there). I’ll report back on the change in conversion rate in [...]

]]> By: This Week In SEO - 7/27/07 - TheVanBlog http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-89408 This Week In SEO - 7/27/07 - TheVanBlog Sat, 28 Jul 2007 01:25:51 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-89408 [...] Copywriting Maven’s Landing Page Makeover Clinic #2: StartBreakingFree.com [...] [...] Copywriting Maven’s Landing Page Makeover Clinic #2: StartBreakingFree.com [...]

]]> By: Roberta Rosenberg http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-87686 Roberta Rosenberg Wed, 25 Jul 2007 09:54:08 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-87686 Rock on, indeed :) Rock on, indeed :)

]]> By: Brian Armstrong http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-87611 Brian Armstrong Wed, 25 Jul 2007 05:03:19 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-87611 Roberta, this is great and I plan on implementing your changes tomorrow! Will report back on the improvement. Thanks! Brian Roberta, this is great and I plan on implementing your changes tomorrow! Will report back on the improvement. Thanks!
Brian

]]> By: Brian Clark http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-87549 Brian Clark Wed, 25 Jul 2007 03:14:56 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-87549 Sorry if that came across as harsh... I've had a rough day. :) Sorry if that came across as harsh… I’ve had a rough day. :)

]]> By: cool websites http://www.copyblogger.com/landing-page-makeover-2/#comment-87529 cool websites Wed, 25 Jul 2007 02:25:33 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/copywriting-mavens-landing-page-makeover-clinic-2-startbreakingfreecom/#comment-87529 Lol. You're right. That is embarrassing. How the heck did I miss that? My bad. Rock on, Roberta. ;-) Lol. You’re right. That is embarrassing. How the heck did I miss that? My bad. Rock on, Roberta. ;-)

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