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By: Diana Daffner

Diana Daffner — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 04:47:29 +0000

Wow, that would be so helpful, a sketch showing what it might look like. Yes, I’m the ‘client’ here… and no, I haven’t yet implemented this wonderful advice from Roberta. I appreciate everyone’s comments and look forward to doing more than just the tiny tweak I’ve managed so far!

By: Kara

Kara — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 00:41:24 +0000

Sweet!

By: Roberta Rosenberg

Roberta Rosenberg — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 22:58:59 +0000

Hi Kara, I’m a marketing writer not a designer. I try to be thorough enough in my comments so that the makeover ‘client’ can do the revisions or have someone else do the revisions.

But you’ve given me an idea. Give me a little time to flesh it out. Thanks!

By: Kara

Kara — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 22:43:26 +0000

Great suggestions! I don’t see the “after” visual…is this the right link to the makeover article?

While I understand it’s time-consuming to do a full PSD, the article could have more “oomph” if there was even a SnagIt of what you think it would look like. Otherwise, it seems more like a commentary than a makeover.

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By: Roberta Rosenberg

Roberta Rosenberg — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 17:32:22 +0000

Always grand to hear from you, Dina. We build ultimate trust when we make ultimate sense. That’s the 2-3 second window our visitors afford us. When you’re ready for a site makeover, I promise to make room on the schedule.

By: Dina Eisenberg

Dina Eisenberg — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 16:08:10 +0000

Roberta, you really are brilliant! I had the pleasure of interviewing Diana for my former marriage blog so I know how much good she has to offer the world. How great to see she’ll benefit from your smarts!

I’m also getting a lot from this crit. Like Diana, I talk about one of those ‘weird topics’- wedding drama so it’s enormously helpful to hear how build trust and acceptance of a new concept. Every bit of good advice is going into my new site! And, I’m hoping to have my own makeover someday soon.

All the best, Dina

By: Roberta Rosenberg

Roberta Rosenberg — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 21:15:22 +0000

I think last chance offers can be effective depending on what is being sold. I don’t think it’s a good install for this site, however. Legitimate testimonials from genuine customers/clients who do not stand to gain from their testimonial (i.e. an affiliate) are perfectly fine. For all others, transparency of purpose and relationship should always be paramount.

By: Dave Batterson

Dave Batterson — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 19:28:00 +0000

How do you feel about 2nd chance or last chance offers? I think they are annoying but I have bought based upon the benefit of getting it cheaper when Im about to leave a page and get a deep discount for buying now. And… In #1 you mentioned “testimonials”. Are these testimonials still legal? According to FTC guidelines?