Comments on: A Copyblogger Tagline Clinic… In the Comment Section! http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/ Online marketing that works Thu, 09 Feb 2012 12:42:19 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Deb http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956232 Deb Sat, 07 Aug 2010 14:15:55 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956232 Thanks and would love your feedback. I am still working on my site - will be changing it to CenterforGreatContent.com 1. I am a Copywriter, Content Creator and Consultant. My focus is on customizing content for engaging new B2B buying habits and attracting customers. 2. My Target Audience is Small to Mid-sized B2B Technology Companies (minimum 25 employees) 3. Current Tag Line: Leverage the Power of Valuable Content to Attract Customers Thank you for your help. Thanks and would love your feedback.
I am still working on my site – will be changing it to CenterforGreatContent.com

1. I am a Copywriter, Content Creator and Consultant. My focus is on customizing content for engaging new B2B buying habits and attracting customers.

2. My Target Audience is Small to Mid-sized B2B Technology Companies (minimum 25 employees)

3. Current Tag Line:
Leverage the Power of Valuable Content to Attract Customers

Thank you for your help.

]]> By: Laurie Gray http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956224 Laurie Gray Sat, 07 Aug 2010 13:39:28 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956224 I'm an attorney and author working on a parenting book based on the Socratic method that helps parents to develop their own philosophy and to parent using discipleship over strict discipline (punishments and rewards). My current tagline is "Know yourself. Know your child." It attempts to incorporate the old Delphic Oracle proclamation to "Know Thyself" Thanks for your feedback! I’m an attorney and author working on a parenting book based on the Socratic method that helps parents to develop their own philosophy and to parent using discipleship over strict discipline (punishments and rewards). My current tagline is “Know yourself. Know your child.” It attempts to incorporate the old Delphic Oracle proclamation to “Know Thyself”

Thanks for your feedback!

]]> By: Lisa http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956162 Lisa Sat, 07 Aug 2010 08:21:14 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956162 Thanks so much for offering to give feedback! My sites still so new, I'm trying to learn as much as possible. What I have to Offer - Gardening advice blog with discussion forums. Setting up a store to sell garden items Who I'm trying to reach - Anyone who enjoys gardening Current Tagline - An exploration into the fun and exciting world of gardening Thanks so much for offering to give feedback! My sites still so new, I’m trying to learn as much as possible.

What I have to Offer – Gardening advice blog with discussion forums. Setting up a store to sell garden items
Who I’m trying to reach – Anyone who enjoys gardening
Current Tagline – An exploration into the fun and exciting world of gardening

]]> By: deborah http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956142 deborah Sat, 07 Aug 2010 06:22:25 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956142 You all are amazing! What a great idea and thanks so much.... My website: http://www.AnsweringTheSacred.com Helping those ready for their life to reflect what their spirit wants most 1. what I have to offer: one-one coaching, classes to redesign specific part of life (though it's related to all other parts of a life), and longer, 6 month program to teach people how to self-coach 2. the type of people I'm wanting to connect with: People motivated by their values of family, leadership, integrity, who want to learn how to manage their energy as they move through conscious transformations. My work/training is non-denominational but works with a person's connection to inner Wisdom and Guidance. 3. My current tagline: Helping those ready for their life to reflect what their spirit wants most You all are amazing! What a great idea and thanks so much….

My website:

http://www.AnsweringTheSacred.com
Helping those ready for their life to reflect what their spirit wants most

1. what I have to offer:
one-one coaching, classes to redesign specific part of life (though it’s related to all other parts of a life), and longer, 6 month program to teach people how to self-coach

2. the type of people I’m wanting to connect with:
People motivated by their values of family, leadership, integrity, who want to learn how to manage their energy as they move through conscious transformations.

My work/training is non-denominational but works with a person’s connection to inner Wisdom and Guidance.

3. My current tagline:

Helping those ready for their life to reflect what their spirit wants most

]]> By: Kelley Terrill http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956125 Kelley Terrill Sat, 07 Aug 2010 04:48:55 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956125 I'm getting ready to launch a 'real' online shop and lack of a proper tag line is driving me nuts. Currently it's "Cute, functional and affordable products." So it sucks. After reading the blog posts, I started to come up with something hopefully a bit more sophisticated like "Say it with Style". But I get stuck feeling like that doesn't really adequately describe my product lines. Any help, suggestions or constructive criticism are welcome. My current website is http://owlsay.etsy.com I have an excellent, already well-loved logo for all my products. The bulk of my orders are for travel gear (passport covers, luggage tags and travel wallets). My target audience is mainly women 18-45. My overall mission is quality, cheap products - affordable on any budget. Thanks!!! I’m getting ready to launch a ‘real’ online shop and lack of a proper tag line is driving me nuts. Currently it’s “Cute, functional and affordable products.” So it sucks.

After reading the blog posts, I started to come up with something hopefully a bit more sophisticated like “Say it with Style”. But I get stuck feeling like that doesn’t really adequately describe my product lines. Any help, suggestions or constructive criticism are welcome. My current website is http://owlsay.etsy.com

I have an excellent, already well-loved logo for all my products. The bulk of my orders are for travel gear (passport covers, luggage tags and travel wallets). My target audience is mainly women 18-45. My overall mission is quality, cheap products – affordable on any budget. Thanks!!!

]]> By: Roberta Rosenberg http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956104 Roberta Rosenberg Sat, 07 Aug 2010 03:13:49 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956104 @Annie - The Love Coach for Midlife Singles - Get out there! @Annie – The Love Coach for Midlife Singles – Get out there!

]]> By: Deborah DeGolyer http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956093 Deborah DeGolyer Sat, 07 Aug 2010 02:43:50 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956093 Thanks, Roberta! Thanks, Roberta!

]]> By: Annie Gleason http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956089 Annie Gleason Sat, 07 Aug 2010 02:32:09 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956089 My business name: Get A Love Life: My Tagline (which I was happy with until I read this) Dating Coaching for Midlife Singles. How can I jazz it up? My program opens up my clients eyes to unexpected ways of finding love with people they never knew existed. They become confident and secure in themselves while dating. My business name: Get A Love Life:
My Tagline (which I was happy with until I read this) Dating Coaching for Midlife Singles.
How can I jazz it up? My program opens up my clients eyes to unexpected ways of finding love with people they never knew existed. They become confident and secure in themselves while dating.

]]> By: Roberta Rosenberg http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956003 Roberta Rosenberg Sat, 07 Aug 2010 00:09:12 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-956003 @Deborah - Write Better Business English, Right Now @Tracy - Effective, hands-on pain management and relief @Dina - As familiar as the family file cabinet, only safer and more secure. @Katy - (with more focus on your core mission, the better and more obvious your tag could be.) @David - Where faith and music photography come together to serve (Him) @Helen A - Learn the art of running a creative business without losing your soul @Deborah – Write Better Business English, Right Now
@Tracy – Effective, hands-on pain management and relief
@Dina – As familiar as the family file cabinet, only safer and more secure.
@Katy – (with more focus on your core mission, the better and more obvious your tag could be.)
@David – Where faith and music photography come together to serve (Him)
@Helen A – Learn the art of running a creative business without losing your soul

]]> By: the inadvertent farmer http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-955949 the inadvertent farmer Fri, 06 Aug 2010 22:22:36 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-955949 wow...that is great! Thanks, Kim wow…that is great! Thanks, Kim

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