Comments on: A Copyblogger Tagline Clinic… In the Comment Section! http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/ Copywriting and Content Marketing Strategies Fri, 19 Mar 2010 04:32:27 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: ravi http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-734372 ravi Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:22:18 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-734372 We’d be happy to come help as well. Sounds fun! We’d be happy to come help as well. Sounds fun!

]]> By: Jem http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-688766 Jem Fri, 07 Aug 2009 19:10:34 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-688766 Hi, Great thread. Really struggling with a tagline. Just in the middle of writing my first ever blog post but here is my spec for it: I would describe my blog as holistic in nature. It is meant feed and stimulate mind, body and spirit and encourage new alternative ways of looking at life with a spiritual perspective and a ‘back to basics‘ simple minimalist approach. There will be articles to encourage people to become more intuitive and to relax more as well as discussions on metaphysics and psychic and supernatural matters. It’s meant to provoke people into rethinking their current perceptions and going against the ’norm’ and questioning the conventional approach. There will also be articles on how to read tarot cards, rune meanings etc. As physical health comes into the equation I will also be advocating the raw food lifestyle which has a spiritual element to it. Also there will be book recommendations, selected poems, inspirational quotes and photographs etc. It will include ANY piece of information I feel is fascinating or important eg facts about bees, for example, or other cultures... Another important element of the blog will be the coverage of eco and ‘green’ topics. The tone will be humorous. Inspiring, cool and quirky. I did consider "WARNING! This Blog Could Change Your Life." Any suggestion gratefully received...Jem :) Hi, Great thread. Really struggling with a tagline.

Just in the middle of writing my first ever blog post but here is my spec for it:

I would describe my blog as holistic in nature. It is meant feed and stimulate mind, body and spirit and encourage new alternative ways of looking at life with a spiritual perspective and a ‘back to basics‘ simple minimalist approach.

There will be articles to encourage people to become more intuitive and to relax more as well as discussions on metaphysics and psychic and supernatural matters. It’s meant to provoke people into rethinking their current perceptions and going against the ’norm’ and questioning the conventional approach. There will also be articles on how to read tarot cards, rune meanings etc.

As physical health comes into the equation I will also be advocating the raw food lifestyle which has a spiritual element to it.

Also there will be book recommendations, selected poems, inspirational quotes and photographs etc.

It will include ANY piece of information I feel is fascinating or important eg facts about bees, for example, or other cultures… Another important element of the blog will be the coverage of eco and ‘green’ topics.

The tone will be humorous. Inspiring, cool and quirky.

I did consider “WARNING! This Blog Could Change Your Life.”

Any suggestion gratefully received…Jem :)

]]> By: Sher http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-601405 Sher Tue, 17 Mar 2009 19:18:33 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-601405 Sorry, just read up and realized I need to give you more...here goes... Problem: People feel stuck in their lives. They aren't living the life they want or desire. Some are but still feel unfulfilled as they haven't dealt with past issues Solution: One-to-one counselling sessions and group workshops to assist you on your path to success and true happiness/fulfillment. Overcome fears, personal obstacles, substance abuse, trauma, lose weight, determine your goals - personal and professional Target: anyone...one to one clients or corporate meetings Current tag line: there are a few floating around as mentioned earlier but also “FEEL DIFFERENT...THINK DIFFERENT... LIVE REAL” Thanks again! Sorry, just read up and realized I need to give you more…here goes…

Problem: People feel stuck in their lives. They aren’t living the life they want or desire. Some are but still feel unfulfilled as they haven’t dealt with past issues

Solution: One-to-one counselling sessions and group workshops to assist you on your path to success and true happiness/fulfillment. Overcome fears, personal obstacles, substance abuse, trauma, lose weight, determine your goals – personal and professional

Target: anyone…one to one clients or corporate meetings

Current tag line: there are a few floating around as mentioned earlier but also “FEEL DIFFERENT…THINK DIFFERENT… LIVE REAL”

Thanks again!

]]> By: Sher http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-601403 Sher Tue, 17 Mar 2009 19:09:26 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-601403 Hi REALLY need some help coming up with a tagline. Don't have one currently and am trying to create one. The mission is making people feel different. Originally it was "the missing PEACE is you" trying to convey that the missing piece of you is you and by finding it you will find peace. The other part is "unlock your power inside" It really is about transforming your life through one-one counseling, hypnotherapy or group workshops Would absolutely love some feedback...or something totally new THANKS! Hi REALLY need some help coming up with a tagline. Don’t have one currently and am trying to create one.
The mission is making people feel different. Originally it was “the missing PEACE is you” trying to convey that the missing piece of you is you and by finding it you will find peace.
The other part is “unlock your power inside”
It really is about transforming your life through one-one counseling, hypnotherapy or group workshops Would absolutely love some feedback…or something totally new THANKS!

]]> By: Connecting Desires with Actions: James Chartrand Interview | Someday Syndrome http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-499884 Connecting Desires with Actions: James Chartrand Interview | Someday Syndrome Mon, 01 Sep 2008 09:44:31 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-499884 [...] was wondering whether I should shut it down, when on a whim I posted my blog name and tagline on Copyblogger’s Tagline Clinic. James replied right away and sparked a complete renewal of the blog. It’s now become the [...] [...] was wondering whether I should shut it down, when on a whim I posted my blog name and tagline on Copyblogger’s Tagline Clinic. James replied right away and sparked a complete renewal of the blog. It’s now become the [...]

]]> By: Lori Radun http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-455817 Lori Radun Tue, 22 Jul 2008 20:58:51 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-455817 I am going through a brand change, and I am in need of a tag line. My new brand name is Momnificent. In a nutshell, I help moms feel good about who they are and the life they live. Most moms come to me feeling stressed out and unhappy with some aspect of their lives. I offer solutions to their most common problems either through life coaching, workshops, personal growth products, and online tips. Anyone have ideas? I am going through a brand change, and I am in need of a tag line. My new brand name is Momnificent. In a nutshell, I help moms feel good about who they are and the life they live. Most moms come to me feeling stressed out and unhappy with some aspect of their lives. I offer solutions to their most common problems either through life coaching, workshops, personal growth products, and online tips. Anyone have ideas?

]]> By: Hans Kainz http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-455539 Hans Kainz Tue, 22 Jul 2008 13:07:39 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-455539 Hi everybody! I will start a (simple) twitterish project in another language. I would love to hear some mindblowing taglines for this microblogging webapp. Of course i will then translate the tagline into my language. Please avoid something like "What are you doing". Hi everybody! I will start a (simple) twitterish project in another language. I would love to hear some mindblowing taglines for this microblogging webapp. Of course i will then translate the tagline into my language. Please avoid something like “What are you doing”.

]]> By: Lawton Chiles http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-452027 Lawton Chiles Sat, 19 Jul 2008 14:52:55 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-452027 Hello there, i hope it's not to late to add my site in. I run Chiles Advertising... oh well, here's what really matters: Target audience: Small-medium sized business owners, professionals who are secure in their fields. Problem: Their sales have leveled off and they are not using their website/advertising well. The copy is stale and not emotional, they have no list or value-offers, and are not using social media tools either. Basically, they need a 21st Century Content Upgrade Solution: I write copy that hits your visitor's hot buttons, and entices them to buy your products, services and ideas. Creating "value products" like persuasive video and audio, white papers that convert your visitors from "maybe" to "yes, I want that now" buyers. Right now my tagline is "Making money online with higher-profit strategies" What about" Turning your website visitors into repeat customers time and time again". Thoughts? Hello there, i hope it’s not to late to add my site in. I run Chiles Advertising… oh well, here’s what really matters:

Target audience: Small-medium sized business owners, professionals who are secure in their fields.

Problem: Their sales have leveled off and they are not using their website/advertising well. The copy is stale and not emotional, they have no list or value-offers, and are not using social media tools either. Basically, they need a 21st Century Content Upgrade

Solution: I write copy that hits your visitor’s hot buttons, and entices them to buy your products, services and ideas. Creating “value products” like persuasive video and audio, white papers that convert your visitors from “maybe” to “yes, I want that now” buyers.

Right now my tagline is “Making money online with higher-profit strategies”

What about” Turning your website visitors into repeat customers time and time again”.

Thoughts?

]]> By: Rowan Manahan http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-451442 Rowan Manahan Fri, 18 Jul 2008 22:56:05 +0000 http://www.copyblogger.com/tagline-clinic/#comment-451442 My mum always said you have to give first, so my $0.02 for @nimic is "Planet-saving tips that won't cost you the Earth" My blog is 'Fortify Your Oasis' and its current tag is 'Consultant and author Rowan Manahan's musings on the world of work, career management and personal development' Having read all the thoughts above, my two reactions now are: "Rowan who?" and no problem/solution offering. Problem - the world of work is not a bundle of laughs Solution - stop, reflect, apply common sense and a dollop of learning-from-other-people's-mistakes Audience - 28-45, ambitious, thinking managers and executives Any help would be greatly appreciated. My mum always said you have to give first, so my $0.02 for @nimic is “Planet-saving tips that won’t cost you the Earth”

My blog is ‘Fortify Your Oasis’ and its current tag is ‘Consultant and author Rowan Manahan’s musings on the world of work, career management and personal development’

Having read all the thoughts above, my two reactions now are: “Rowan who?” and no problem/solution offering.

Problem – the world of work is not a bundle of laughs
Solution – stop, reflect, apply common sense and a dollop of learning-from-other-people’s-mistakes
Audience – 28-45, ambitious, thinking managers and executives

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

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