Why Some People Almost Always Write Great Post Titles

by Brian Clark

What are some of the characteristics of people who crank out blog titles that work really well most of the time? Is it something anyone can learn?

Yes, and except in very rare cases, writing great post titles and other headlines can likely only be learned. Rather than relying on natural talent, people who consistently produce winning headlines have learned to do three basic things:

1. They understand that all compelling headlines make an intriguing promise that makes it almost irresistible to its target audience. Understanding the intended audience is key — a really great headline generally won’t appeal to everyone, and watering it down for mass appeal will only hurt you.

2. They study headlines that have been proven to work, and that usually means direct response advertising headlines. In that context, “proven to work” means people responded to that particular headline by pulling out their wallets and making a purchase. You can also learn by studying some of the top magazine headline writers, who work for Cosmopolitan and similar glossies, and even the tabloids you see at the supermarket checkout lane.

3. Most importantly, rather than simply mimicking great headlines, they understand why the headline works, and therefore can make an educated decision as to which type of headline structure is most appropriate, and how to tweak it within a certain context.

So what about the title of the blog post you’re reading right now?

1. Starting off your post title with “why” at the beginning of a declarative statement (instead of a question) is one easy way to focus in on the benefit of reading your article. That’s one of the reasons why the title of this post works, but the words that follow the “why” are what’s most important.

You can do the same by starting with “here’s why,” “what,” “when,” or “how,” or you can simply make a strong statement that clearly demonstrates that the elaborated answer will be provided in the body content. And of course a carefully worded question can magnetically draw in your intended readers as well.

2. The title is modeled after this famous advertising headline:

Why Some People Almost Always Make Money in the Stock Market

Within the context of what I wanted to convey with this post, the basic structure of this classic headline works perfectly.

Why?

3. Credibility. The use of the word “some,” and having “almost” modify “always,” make the headline much more plausible. Not even the highest paid copywriters in the world always nail a headline that works, and some people never write great post titles, because they don’t take the time to learn how.

Many people feel that a great headline is bombastic and full of hyperbole, but that’s usually not the case. If people don’t believe you can deliver on your promise, they won’t bother reading further, and your over-the-top headline fails.

As the people aiming to land on the front pages of Digg, Delicious, and other social bookmarking sites up the ante with headlines that strain credibility, their results will diminish, while you will gain an advantage by becoming a true student of great headline writing. Understanding what type of headline is appropriate to a specific context is the real key to writing magnetic post titles that will get your writing read.

Recommended:

David Garfinkel’s headline swipe file book (with analysis and examples) available from Amazon

This is the sixth installment in a series of posts called Magnetic Headlines.

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{ 19 comments… read them below or add one }

1 Mike July 26, 2006 at 10:06 pm

Another great instructional post.

Don’t forget to mention to not use Barbie and Furby in your headlines !

2 Damien July 27, 2006 at 1:46 am

Just started reading your blog a few days ago; and I’m loving your newest series. Looking forward to the next installments.

3 PACO_FERY July 27, 2006 at 2:44 pm

Very good post.

I think that at the end the most important thing is “Credibility”:

A man can get a reputation from very small things.
Inachus by Sophocles.

4 Nick Hebb (aka The Flow Chart Geek) July 27, 2006 at 11:46 pm

I stumbled upon your site a few weeks ago and have fallen in love with it. I recommend it everywhere.

My background is in manufacturing and most of the career-related writing I’ve done has been for ISO 9000 procedures and work instructions. I can’t help but laugh when I think what my documents would look like if I used your techniques:

Why Some Operators Almost Always Produce Zero Defects …

How to Keep Your Job: The Top Ten Steps To Properly Setting up the SMT Screen Printer …

TR3657 Connector Mount Assembly Secrets Revealed …

Who knows? Maybe the operators would have actually read the documents if I had. ;-)

5 Clair July 28, 2006 at 1:15 am

Writing headlines is something I find difficult. I was reading about writing for the Web and I recall that the writers encourage that we be quite concise and descriptive so that the message would be clearer to the readers, also for search engine optimization. The difficulty I have with this sometimes is that some blog entries seem a bit too boring or overused.

Your blog entry has made me think a lot more about the way I write my headlines.

You are also right about one more thing: understanding why headlines work is important. I don’t get to read much printed material but on the Net I need to see how things fit, more or less so I could write better headlines.

6 Brian July 28, 2006 at 6:01 am

Nick, hilarious! I likewise wonder what would have happened if I would have written my legal motions that way.

Actually, some lawyers do…

Clair, one thing that I’ve found is if you understand how headlines work, you don’t need to try to write a homerun headline for every blog post. But you will end up writing snappier headlines off the top of your head, even for the more day-to-day mundane posts.

7 Tiziana July 28, 2006 at 6:48 am

Thanks a lot. Very interesting article!

8 ming July 29, 2006 at 3:12 am

i found a new way of doing headlines.. now if only i can think of a name for it.

9 Tammy July 29, 2006 at 1:12 pm

Another great post in this series – I’m finding that when I write a “better” headline I’m actually simply following your advice. Above all else – keeping it reader focused helps alot even if its a mediocre headline. :-)

Tammy

10 A.H July 29, 2006 at 2:16 pm

Hello,

Been reading your blog for a while now, and can’t wait for the next series to roll =)

A.H

11 e-tech August 1, 2006 at 1:18 pm

Same here, been reading a while and totally enjoying what i’m reading.

Thanks

12 vaspers the grate August 4, 2006 at 9:11 am

This is a beautiful, well designed and written blog.

You could also add, “Use numbers.”

Titles like “12 Ways to Improve Your Blog Writing” work well.

Also “Use variety”.

Christopher Locke told me some of his highest traffic posts of the past had totally irrelevant, silly, weird titles.

“Amoogo Monkey Bombs” or whatever.

It makes readers curious, “what the h is that?”

Peace, brother attorney!

13 Brian August 4, 2006 at 9:25 am

Hey Vaspers, welcome! You must have missed the previous headline post, “7 Reasons Why List Posts Will Always Work”. :)

And I too am a huge Chris Locke fan. He’s uniquely qualified to work those pure curiosity titles. I’ve been falling for them for over 7 years.

14 Roshawn November 2, 2006 at 3:20 am

Do you ever stop writing great articles? I’m fast becoming a “copyblogger junkie.” :-)

15 United Voices July 19, 2008 at 5:20 am

Like you do too. your post title are very catchy.

16 Dhane Diesil August 12, 2009 at 8:52 pm

Fantastic article Brain!

17 ravi October 2, 2009 at 5:23 am

Thanks a lot. Very interesting article!

18 mk akan January 24, 2010 at 3:18 pm

having a great post title is like a sign post,we only look at the ones that gives us what we want or promises something better before we go in.but you better have that promise when i come in…
very educating..thanks

19 Eric January 25, 2010 at 4:49 am

I believe the title of each post is the light that allows it to shine. I say this only because without striking interest at all, it just will be skipped and never to be read in the first place… Of course unless it’s the newest article.

Even so, people can get bored and move on.

That being said, if you want a place for your article, write an amazing title that shows you’re doing something for your readers and write your title first forcing yourself to write a great article following.

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